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| − | =Halloweenies=
| + | * '''[[User:Rugiel/Halloweenies|Halloweenies]]''' arc proofing notes |
| − | Played on 15 Nov 2010
| + | * '''[[User:Rugiel/Dreamsaviors|Dreamsaviors]]''' game notes |
| − | Key: '''{{red|[delete]}}'''; '''{{blue|[edit]}}'''; '''{{color|green|[add]}}'''; ''{{color|purple|(my remarks)}}''
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| − | :'''''Note:''' Not all the text is present. Most chunks of text are in their entirety for context, but if any are missing, either I didn't trigger them or they don't need any corrections.'' | + | |
| − | ==Mission 1==
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| − | ;Briefing
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| − | :Can you hear me, $name'''{{red|[ ]}}'''?
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| − | :No...I'm not really here, and my eyes are up here.
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| − | :Thanks.
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| − | :I need you to focus and listen to me. Something has happened to the heroes of Paragon. I can feel there is a change in the balance of time, and it feels like another one of Puck's tricks. We've all been turned into kids and have lost our adult memories while trapped by Puck's minions.'''{{red|[.]}}''' How do I know? I'm contacting you from my future to warn you of what happened in my past about your present.
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| − | :Try not to look so confused.
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| − | :I need you to help us. Now. Before we're all snacks for his minions.
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| − | (Accept)
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| − | :I'll see you on the inside as I was then.
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| − | :I know, it's hard to follow all the "timeline stuff'''{{blue|[,"]}}''' but try to keep up.
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| − | :I've cast an inv'''{{blue|[ul]}}'''nerability spell to try and help protect the otherwise defenseless children who are trick or treating in the neighborhood, but there are so many that the spell is thinning, so hurry.
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| − | :Good '''{{blue|[l]}}'''uck. | + | |
| − | ;About War Witch
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| − | :Here she is, yet again, to pull our proverbial tushes out of the fire by means of magic and enchantment. Where would heroes be without this wonderful (and thankfully, benevolent) semi-living impaired'''{{color|green|[,]}}''' temp'''{{red|[r]}}'''orally displaced hero?
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| − | ;Mission entry popup
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| − | :You hear the echo'''{{color|green|[e]}}'''s of what you think are children enjoying Halloween, but something seems wrong. Strange shapes loom in the darkness and a maniac'''{{red|[i]}}'''al laugh echoes in the distance.
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| − | ;Mission objectives
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| − | :Find ''Little'' States, Find ''Little'' Posi, Find ''Little'' Manni, Find Lil' Sis, Find Lil' Syn, Find Lil' War Witch, Find Lil' BABs, Find Lil' Swan, Find the '''{{blue|[e]}}'''vil ''''{{blue|[y]}}'''ou' that Puck created - '''{{blue|[t]}}'''here can only be '''{{blue|[o]}}'''ne!
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| − | :{{color|purple|''(Perhaps abbreviate the first three'' Little''s to'' Lil'''?)''}}
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| − | ;Fae enemy group - ''{{color|purple|(All except You?? need descriptions)}}''
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| − | :You?? -
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| − | ::[NPC] You??: YEAH! I '''{{blue|[r]}}'''ock!! I totally kicked the real $target's tush!
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| − | ::[NPC] You??: Temper, '''{{blue|[t]}}'''emper!
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| − | ::[NPC] You??: Aww, '''{{blue|[m]}}'''an! Now I'll never get my costume deposit back from Cheezey Heroes costume rentals!
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| − | ;Trick or Treaters - ''{{color|purple|(All need descriptions)}}''
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| − | ;Hero Kids
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| − | :Little States -
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| − | ::You can see the hero he will become reflected in those little defiant eyes. Those pouty lips. That held high chin. That pr'''{{blue|[o]}}'''clivity for showing off all nature blessed him with in those tiny tights. Awwwwww....Isn't he so cute! Just so precious. Where is a video camera (for blackmail pictures on YouTube) when you need one??
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| − | ::[NPC] Little States: You're my hero - I hope I grow up to be just like you, $name'''{{red|[ ]}}'''!
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| − | :Little Posi -
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| − | ::Brilliant even as a child, he stands there trying to talk them out of taking his candy. Tru'''{{red|[e]}}'''ly, he is the brains of the group and will grow into a force to be reckoned with. For now, he's a little kid in a very heavy metal suit who won't have to worry '''{{color|gray|[for long]}}''' about how to use the bathroom while in that suit '''{{color|orange|[for long bathroom]}}''' if not rescued soon.
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| − | :''{{color|purple|(I blame the text edit box for that one. Not sure what you wanted there; this is my best guess.)}}''
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| − | ::[NPC] Little Posi: Thanks, $name'''{{red|[ ]}}'''! You should try the Milky Way bars! They are 'da bomb'!
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| − | :Little Man'''{{color|green|[n]}}'''i - ''{{color|purple|(For consistency, this is the only place it's not spelled with two n's.)}}''
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| − | ::A charmer to th'''{{blue|[e]}}''' last, even as a spunky youth he isn't cow'''{{red|[er]}}'''ed by the firey Fae that have him cornered. He already has a majority of the machismo and ego his body will eventually grow into. Don't bother trying to slip him your phone numbers, gals, beca'''{{blue|[us]}}'''e even now he only has eyes for Sister Psyche...
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| − | ::[NPC] Little Man'''{{color|green|[n]}}'''i: Hey, $name - '''{{red|[']}}'''Little help here?
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| − | ::[NPC] Little Man'''{{color|green|[n]}}'''i: Thanks, $name'''{{red|[ ]}}'''. Now which way did that hot little number Sister Psyche go?
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| − | :Lil' Sis -
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| − | :: Kind and caring as she rends her foes from the inside out, this part'''{{blue|[ia]}}'''lly clad little lass proves the old saying about red heads. No wonder Manni is smitten.
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| − | :Lil' Syn - ''{{color|purple|(no edits)}}''
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| − | :Lil' War Witch -
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| − | ::Where would we be without the regular intervention of this benevo'''{{red|[l]}}'''lent soul who is constantly using her abilities for temporal displac'''{{color|green|[e]}}'''ment to save our tushes in the here and now? Probably toast. Nice'''{{red|[y]}}''' crunch'''{{color|green|[y]}}''' extra crispy toast. Maybe with a little marm'''{{blue|[a]}}'''lade... a side of ham and some eggs...hmm ((See, kids - this is why you don't write on an empty stomach.))
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| − | ::[NPC] Lil' War Witch: I'm glad you made it. Can you take care of these guys for me, '''{{blue|[p]}}'''lease?
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| − | :Lil' BABs - ''{{color|purple|(no edits)}}''
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| − | :Lil' Swan -
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| − | ::[NPC] Lil' Swan: I'm freezing out here! Why didn't I wear more th'''{{blue|[a]}}'''n this??
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| − | ;Mission success popup
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| − | :Now, let's see if we can get Puck where he lives'''{{blue|[ - ]}}'''lit'''{{red|[t]}}'''erally'''{{blue|[ -]}}''' and save Halloween.
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| − | ;Debriefing
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| − | :Great work, $name'''{{red|[ ]}}'''. I'm glad to see you saved the heroes, just as I remembered you had. Now, we need to find Puck and get the candy back to save Halloween before we're doomed to only having candycorn to eat!
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| − | ==Mission 2==
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| − | ;Briefing
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| − | : To recap, here's what we know, so far -
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| − | :Puck the Prankster has managed to cause Halloween mayhem in Paragon by altering the flow of time and turning all of the heroes into children. Futhermore, he was replacing the yummy delicious candy with nothing but packets of candycorn.
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| − | :We found out he's taken all the good ca'''{{color|green|[n]}}'''dy home with him to the Fae Realm, so if you'll give me some time to con'''{{blue|[ce]}}'''ntrate, I will open 'the Way' for you ....
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| − | :. . . . . .
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| − | :Ok...It's open...Hurry. Save the Candy - Save Halloween... You'll also need to find Puck the Prankster in his True Fae form and defeat him.... go now....
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| − | ;Save Halloween -'''{{color|green|[ ]}}'''Get the '''{{blue|[c]}}'''andy!
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| − | :Save the good candy and defeat Puck the Prankster in his true '''{{blue|[f]}}'''orm to save Halloween. We're counting on you...
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| − | ;Mission objectives
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| − | :3 The Good Candy ''{{color|purple|(I believe the Collection objective's Text heading would allow you to define this objective explicitly as simply "Good Candy" in the Navigation Text (Plural) field and something along the lines of "One more Good Candy" in the Navigation Text (Singular) field.(}}''
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| − | ;Collection progress bar
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| − | :...Snickers, Milky '''{{blue|[W]}}'''ays, M&Ms, Reese'''{{color|green|[']}}'''s Peanut Butter Cups'''{{red|[ cups]}}'''..'''{{color|green|[.]}}'''((DROOLS))..'''{{color|green|[.]}}'''
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| − | ''{{color|purple|(Begin objective and interrupt text might be nice to have, although not terribly urgently.)}}''
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| − | ;Fae enemy group -
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| − | :Puck the Prankster -
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| − | ::Puck the Prankster - the magnificent...the all powerful....the way sexie'''{{blue|[r]}}''' th'''{{blue|[a]}}'''n you... the ('''{{red|[ ]}}'''guess who's writing this, silly mortals) amazing..'''{{color|green|[.]}}'''
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| − | ::Yes, my hero '''{{blue|[H]}}'''alloWEENIEs... it is I.
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| − | ::And now it's time for you to die.
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| − | ::The game is over, and my prize is won.
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| − | ::You can'''{{red|[ ]}}'''not stop my Halloween fun.
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| − | ::Turn back now while you still live.
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| − | ::I'''{{color|green|[t]}}''''s not an offer that I'm likely twice to give....
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| − | ::[NPC] Puck the Prankster: Mine'''{{red|[ ]}}'''! Mine! It's ALL'''{{red|[ ]}}''' MINE!!!'''{{red|[ ]}}''' I got the candy and stopped the time!
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| − | ::[NPC] Puck the Prankster: It looks as if the Hero H'''{{blue|[a]}}'''lloWEENIES have come to give us sport. Let us hear your witty retort!
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| − | ::[NPC] Puck the Prankster: I rightfu'''{{color|green|[l]}}'''ly stole what you try to take back, but '''{{color|orange|still you will}}''' fail at this half-baked attack! ''{{color|purple|(Maybe sound this out loud, see if it sounds all right to you like it did to me? Again, by the way, I love Puck's rhymes!)}}''
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| − | ;Mission success popup
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| − | : You have saved the heroes, defeated Puck the Prankster, and most importantly saved the '''{{blue|[c]}}'''andy! Great '''{{blue|[j]}}'''ob! I '''{{blue|[think]}}''' I'll be calling you again in your future, $name. In fact, I'm sure of it. Happy Halloween!
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| − | Proofreading by @zehntaur
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| − | Good stuff that's a bit cheaper include Crushing Impact, Thunderstrike, Red Fortune, Titanium Armour, Doctored Wounds, Malaise's Illusions
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| − | =Dreamsavior=
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| − | ! Bell
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| − | ! Area of Expertise
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| − | ! Euphonic Abilities
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| − | ! Physical Abilities
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| − | ! Social Abilities
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| − | ! Flaw
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| − | | Phalanx of One (6W)
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| − | | Musician (19)<br />Soothe the Savage Beast (19)<br />Sound Barrier (19)
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| − | | Massive Frame (1W)<br />Percussive Blast (19)<br />Thunderquick (16)<br />Streetfighter (16)
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| − | | Pragmatic (18)<br />In Service to the Queen (13)
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| − | | Jaded (6W)
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