Talk:Alaestor (Triumph)

Spelling & Grammar

Feel free to make any spelling corrections necessary. Grammar, I'm a little more cautious about (since it may be wrong on purpose and grammar can be more subjective). If you think any grammar changes are needed, please post them here. - Obsidius 20:35, 19 November 2009 (UTC)

Data analysis is making me sleepy today. Proofreading might help me stay awake.  :)

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The also prepared in secret to defend the island against any Nictus insurgency

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They also prepared in secret to defend the island against any Nictus insurgency

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concentrating on vigilence against Nictus

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concentrating on vigilance against Nictus

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the eldest would willing become

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the eldest would willingly become

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bot in the fields of science and warfare

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both in the fields of science and warfare

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William passed Aleastor on to his son

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William passed Alaestor on to his son

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themselves and their Nictus supports how had been hiding

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themselves and their Nictus supporters who had been hiding

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Alaestor had originally travel to Earth

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Alaestor had originally traveled to Earth

Back to checking numbers. :) --Eabrace 21:01, 19 November 2009 (UTC)